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Child Abuse (acrostic)

Cannot understand how someone can hurt a child
Harming an Innocent soul
Inflicting physical pain
Leaving bruises and emotional scars
Demonizing the child’s life

Adults are so much stronger
Bodily harm and injuries don’t take  a lot of force
Usually hidden or covered up with a story or a lie
Scolding the child for doing nothing wrong
Existing among the abuser risks them for more harm   

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Option one: Acrostic (child abuse)
my Ex boyfriend Abused my son

Amy L Miller

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  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Well, I'm very glad to see "ex" there then!!

    Seriously, this is a fantastic poem. WELL DONE and thankyou for entering.

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 13, 2008

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    Incredibly heart-touching acrostic that says nothing but the truth.
    A painful slap in the face of reality.


    Thank you for your entry in Child Abuse Prevention Contest & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    Cannot understand how someone can hurt a child
    Harming an Innocent soul
    Inflicting physical pain
    Leaving bruises and emotional scars
    Demonizing the child’s life

    wonderful powerful truth in your poem I can relate to your words so much good luck in the contest


  • sunflowers21573
    June 10, 2008

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    This rings so true and your words are sooo powerful. How right it states "usually hidden or covered up with a story or a lie" Your poem is so awesome. I wish you luck in the contest and I hope you win.