All I see are words
Masked behind her beauty
All I need to do is dream
All I need is to fall
Fall through it
Fall in love
Fall in her words
Sink and find out
Is this honest?
Is this real?
No...
I am just dreaming
But you can make it come true
For only the words hidden behind your beauty
Are the only words that cut my vision in two
In the darkness of my imagination
The lights are forever turned off
There
My deepest thought [you] has a home
And with a net made out of tears
It captures my heart increasing my moans
Author notes
I was basically thinking about someone I loved... trying to imagine the person but her beauty was just hidden by poetry for i really don't think about her skin, just about her soul and her soul isnt visible unless you describe it with words. Though I love this person how someone is supposed to be truly loved... she hurts me... and that is what the two last verses speak of.
A contest entry
- Close your eyes and tell me what you see by Meroza.
400 points, ended June 18, 2008, 31 entries
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Comments
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I like the way that your poem has the feel of a daydream interupted. That effect is intensified a bit by the way the poem looks sitting on the page. Whether the layout intentionally did this or not, it is still a nice touch.
The sincerity of the emotions is evident and it comes off as deeply personal. Glad I stopped by to read it. -
Aw, this poem is so full of emotions, sad and yet cute! Amazingly done!
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