Dripping drains
Dripping taps
A dripping toilet too
The plumber called
The plumber came
The plumber keeps up you.
You wanna go to bed alright!
so can't he go away!
You wanna ho to bed - you can't!
Cos he is in the way.
bedtime
sleep tight
wake up soon
at morning light
school tomorrow
floor - clothes
fridge - food
sink - wash
door - out
bus - school
Its such a fun thing that i do
At school school every day
So let me get my beauty sleep
Before i fades away.
i wanna go to sleep sleep!
SLEEP SLEEP NOW!
i wanna go to sleep sleep!
i dont wanna watch jurassic gay!
i wanted to go on computer
but i was told to get off
but now im on again
[how fun]
im sure you agve up caring too
i would, just like you
if the plumber did that aswel
but he wont
cos he was rubbish earlier
so he has to do it better
but i wanna go to sleep
A contest entry
- Write me a poem... about anything you want! by RainbowGirl257.
500 points, ended July 22, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
HAPPY END!
Comments
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i love the positive rhythm to your poem, and it's a great poem on a unique subject. just one thing, there's a spelling mistake on the second stanza third line, you spelt to wrong. apart from that it's great! thanks for entering and good luck
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lol, what the feck jess, this is good but wierd and random, but i guess thats u. is rainbow carro? your background scares my lol, but poem is still good. im doing this in science btw so yh, cya
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