I am scarred but beautiful
I am a skilled artist and I use my body as a canvas
The razor is my brush and this blood is my paint
Bright red in color
Quick slices of my brush across this skin
Im talented because I do it often and do it well
The paint spreads so easy
Sometimes I use way too much of it
I am like a crazy person as I rush my work
My art is my profession
Keeps me {in}sane
Author notes
xXcrazychristinaXx
option #2
A contest entry
- ANY THING GOES!!!!! by my1lovewearsdiapers.
900 points, ended June 12, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Emotions Crying Out {Options} by newnoakua.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The last of my points.....for you!! by l33t-n1nj4.
747 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whtcha think?
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im on the fence about this one. The metaphores are great. it just seems less satisfying then I had thought it would be. It was written beautifuly tho. Great job
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oh well good thing u at least liked the metaphores lmao. thanks
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Wow... really good. I agree, the last line was awesome! XP
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thanks hun. hehe glad u liked it.
xoxo
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oooo... so cool. I love the last line.
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hehe thanks
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Wowwww excellent! Such colour; the metaphors fit so nicely!
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hehe thnks babe
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dude i love it!
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hehe awe thank you
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i like your metaphores you have used in this poem, i love the detial and the way you say that your body is canvas and your razor is your brush, i really hope all those scars are making a beautiful picture and not an ugly one, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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thank you wifey! umm actually pretty ugly lol
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if you are going to do that to yourself i think you should make pretty pictures ♥
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ya i kno ...i try tho
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Please dont say this true? *Hugs her tightly* Its sad, but i sort of understand.
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yes...true
sorry...*hugs back tightttttt* ya
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Never be sorry, i know what it like... so i understand. Its just painful to see you do it.
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okay...ya im glad u have an understanding and i love tht u care hun!
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Aren't we all {in}sane at some point this piece I can relate it for I used to be a cutter thank you for the entry and best of luck.
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yes..i think so...thank you and glad you can feel my pain...
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Very emotional. touching, sad, love it
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thanks *huggles you*
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no prob *huggles bk*
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hehe
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here have a rose lol @--
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i love it- its kinda sad though...you should be careful hun...
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thanks! i am...careful...lol
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