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Kauaii Vacation

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Come, swim with me, Kelle Marie!
Dive in and we shall be free.
Let the sea wash you clean from cares,
Ocean waves, be answers to your prayers.
Relax in the peace of the sea-breeze!
Leave your sorrows, be at ease!
Dance upon the warm, freshing sand!
Let affection take your hand!
Take joy into your troubled heart!
Let all of your pain and stress depart!

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  • Blossom Fairy
    July 8, 2008

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    Beautifully said, fine Poet Sir. Wonderful lines that wash over the reader with calm and delightful appreciation.


  • stavykm gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Fabulous poem. Oh I had so much fun with you on the beach and the dive into the sea. You seem to know all about me. Yes to be clean from cares and to feels so free and relaxed in such a beautiful atmosphere then with a friend too. I don't know who wrote this poem but I absolutely love it. I love the rhyme, rhythm, flow, imagery with emotions and feelings. What a fabulous moment and vacation. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm