Hush....
secret whispers echo
where our shouts never meant to go.
A longing so surreal,
even when you are next to me.
Moonlit promises that we would
make the world a better place;
and my world exists only in your heart,
as my heart,
ours alone.
Could it be that happiness exists
in a look, a tone, a smile?
Could it be I exist only because
you do?
Everything you feel reverberates inside,
those tears flowing down your cheeks
are the ones I cried.
And I know in your heartbeat,
I find my life's song,
my voice.
Can you hear me sing?
Hush...
A contest entry
- Between the Shadow and the Soul by Mad Moon.
550 points, ended June 19, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by Midnight-x-Rose.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2146 entries
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Comments
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Love how you began and ended with same words...it seemed to complete the thoughts so well penned in this piece. It drips with wonderful emotions and passion. Thanks for the entry, and Good Luck to you!
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this is so beautiful...you deserve to win that contest! im just reading this over and over again and still it has that same punch i felt in the end...simply haunting yet wonderful.
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This is just brilliant my dear! A really beautiful read, I love the 'happiness' verse, great all round imagery and emotion
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This write SO touches the very soul of the reader. So full of passion and adoration,
"...Could it be that happiness exists
in a look, a tone, a smile?
Could it be I exist only because
you do?..."
Just beautiful! Thanks for this fine addition to the contest, and Good Luck!
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