i close my eyes
You want to now what I see?
what I see...
I see destruction
I see the world dieing away
I see fire and smoke covering the blue sky
I see people dieing
I close my eyes
you want to know what I see?
What i see...
Watching Families lose their sons to war
I see fire falling from the black clouds
Destroying homes, lives, love and land
I see blood staining the earth
I close my eyes
You want to know what I see?
What I'm seeing...
Suicides increasing
Humans turning into monsters
Children having nothing to live for
I see a world that's dead
I'm closing my eyes
I'm loooking deep
And I'm watching...
I'm so young I'm not even close to start a family
And already I have doubts...
If I have a child will it live?
Will it grow into a healthy world?
Will the world end before I get to have a life?
before I create a life?
I don't know what I see?
Death..the end...no hope maybe?
I'm closing my eyes and I see empty walls
I see life ending
I see love fading
I see...I'm Watching everyting turn into,
Empty lifeless shattered cities
I'm watching the world end
And I'm scared
I want a life, there is no god
I see that were in and out of control
I'm watching the bullet hit everyones head...
June 2, 2008
A contest entry
- Close your eyes and tell me what you see by Meroza.
400 points, ended June 18, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite only by kitty23.
470 points, ended June 6, 2008, 68 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Great Write
very good i loved it
its great to see that young adults are taking intrest in this kind of stuff i know i have a 2 or 3 poems on my page about global warmng and all the things people do to ruin are world and then how bad people act open our world when we should be keeping our world sacrade
it was perfect this is what i wanted
i loved the 2 last line in this stanza
"Watching Families lose their sons to war
I see fire falling from the black clouds
Destroying homes, lives, love and land
I see blood staining the earth."
very well done
thank you for entering my contest nd sharing your poem with me
keep up the great work
Kitty23
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what a dark depressing write although these thoughts have gone through my mind also. we live in such a sad world today. thank you for sharing these thoughts from your heart. you are very talented. keep writing! God bless you always
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wow...everything is like.... so awesome
i wish i could give more than 3 applauses
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Oi... I understand your poem.. I think. Hehe. I liked it too. But i feel the same way.. ^-^'
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Your emotions are strong in this, and I can understand your fear of the world. I do agree, humans have lost controll, and there is too much war and un top of it all we are ruining our planet. I see so well why you are scared, for it scares me to death too.
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