Desperately I search for your light,
arms wide open, ready for your embrace,
I feel you, near me, calling me...
I wait for you to devour me...
This burning, desire,
yearning for your touch...
You make me live, I'm alive with you...
Tenderly you carress me,
hypnotizing effects of dreamingless nights,
murmuring me your scent,
evading my ever thinking thought.
We drift to the silent place,
shifting all around us,
only you and me...breathing...
Sweet lullabies hunger our ears,
and the warmth of your whisper flickers my skin,
flawlessly,beautifully...
You make me sway,
hips under your control now,
and I've fallen... I live...
Gasping, my air you've stolen,
Clinging from that last edge of happiness,
I feel you...around me...
While you enjoy my treasuring heart...
I fall under yours, that's already healed...
~♥~
Author notes
My hands are searching for you
My arms are outstretched towards you
I feel you on my fingertips
My tongue dances behind my lips for you
This fire rising through my being
Burning I'm not used to seeing you
I'm alive, I'm alive
I can feel you all around me
Thickening the air I'm breathing
Holding on to what I'm feeling
Savoring this heart that's healing
My hands float up above me
And you whisper you love me
And I begin to fade
Into our secret place
The music makes me sway
The angels singing say we are alone with you
I am alone and they are too with you
I'm alive, I'm alive
I can feel you all around me
Thickening the air I'm breathing
Holding on to what I'm feeling
Savoring this heart that's healing
And so I cry
The light is white
And I see you
I'm alive, I'm alive, I'm alive
I can feel you all around me
Thickening the air I'm breathing
Holding on to what I'm feeling
Savoring this heart that's healing
Take my hand
I give it to you
Now you own me
All I am
You said you would never leave me
I believe you
I believe
I can feel you all around me
Thickening the air I'm breathing
Holding on to what I'm feeling
Savoring this heart that's healed
All Around Me-Flyleaf
* Even though this song talks about God {didn't knew that until now} I want it to make it in the version I understood before and give it another style from the usual.. hope you like! XXVampireeyesXX
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A contest entry
- Prewrite only by kitty23.
470 points, ended June 6, 2008, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love and Emotional by Razor-Blade Romance.
1000 points, ended June 18, 2008, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautifully Sensual. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended June 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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I espically like this poem.
I LOVE the darkness, and passion expressed within this piece. What an amazing write. Really appealed to me.
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