I see the girl
Swinging without a sound
So happy but yet so sad
No companion but she has everything
Beauty beyond our knowledge
An elder mind so young
And the faith of a monk
She is the devil
But she is the angel
Her reflection shows my face
My reflection shows hers
Who's who?
We were once one soul
Two perfect halves put together
But we were torn apart with a promise
A promise of diffrence from others
A promise that any one can be what they want
A promise to overcome the odds
We were split in half
She has the right half
I have the wrong
It is my project to fix myself
One day I will save this girl from her captivity
She is locked away in my mind
The key is lost
So she is lost
She can only be found once the promise is fullfilled
I will set her free
I will be the hero
She guides me along my challenge
Her own life is on the line so she is harsh
Everything must be perfect
If not she is doomed
It is so strange everyone misses her
Once they see her photo they mourn her
But when she was with me they mocked her
Maybe I can make things right if I free her
She is me
I am her
How can we be so diffrent?
Because we are two pieces of the whole
One is almost lost
The other is almost found
Author notes
Sounds crazy right? I know sounds fantasy but every time I close my eyes I see her and I've always thought of her as the piece of me I lost. See people would tell me stuff like I've changed and I was prettier when I was younger and I've noticed the shine in my eye is gone and then I started seeing this girl who gives me advice and I felt as if we were so much alike but so diffrent I can't see her but I feel her. She's like my guardian angel but I think of her as a piece of my soul
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- Close your eyes and tell me what you see by Meroza.
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Comments
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AWESOME
this is an amazing poem reading this would never guess you were 12 well keep it up
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This poem is powerfull but yet so sad! I do agree that who you see might be your guardian angel, but she could also be you.
The perfect way of capturing your image, it just makes me breathless!
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