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"Two Souls"

Two souls drawn together,
Two hearts that beat as one,
A friendship made In heaven,
A true love just begun,
Two people showing feelings,
Two spirits showing love,
Not through the eyes of others,
But blessed by god above,
Never meant to be together,
Two loves so far apart,
Two friends that met and fell In love,
That share a broken heart,
A world that would not understand,
For them to be together,
Two spirits waiting for the chance,
To fall In love for ever,
Two souls of different ages,
As friends the world can see,
Two people that will never meet,
Until their souls are free,
Lovers they will never be,
For they cannot be together,
But friends until the day they die,
They promise this forever.

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  • piccola silver member
    June 3, 2008

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    beautiful. nice rhyme and flow. In one line you repeat the word two so you might want to edit that.


    • Rusty
      June 3, 2008
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      Thank you for pointing out my error with the word two,glad you liked the poem,your comments were very much appreciated.