Our love the
changing seasons turn
to sing in concert
each new day
as one we fold
in unison
precisely joined
in loves foreplay,
Oh kill the summers
grinding heat
that draws my breath
and saps my will
to ask but onnce
of you my love
make an honest man
of me.
A contest entry
- Free Verse Writers....It's Time To Be Creative by Dalaney.
975 points, ended June 3, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any feed back is always helpful
Comments
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I really enjoyed this write. Best of luck in the contest...and I hope she says yes. Keep smiling and keep penning. Oh and one small mistake you put a double 'n' in once...
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Thank you
Thank you for reading this and I see the error, which should have been obvious but wasn't.
I will return the favor and read your work too.
Have a great day.
TC
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