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Don't Make Me Wait

widen your hazed eyes
all this time has elasped
i need this one thing
thats the perfect gift

it will all be over in a minute
but the music repeats in my head
everytime i lose my breath
you are to blame

half-lidded eyes
see the world
and focus on
you

 

not afraid

to let the world fall down

around us

my center of gravity is you this moment 

 

Don't Make Me Wait 

Don't Make Me Say It Outloud

 

 

Author notes

L O V E is very bad for me at this moment. and i guess its because hes not here with me thats why im being all "i looove youuu" but its not usually like that
inspired by - Dont Make Me Wait - This World Fair
[yes i know this is horrible.]

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Not horrible, amazing!
    You are such a good poet!!
    I wish I were as good as you.
    :-<
    Wonderfully fantastic job!!!
    I LOVE it!
    :-D