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Ice drop tears

Ice drop tears
Shattering through
Mixing my soul
Combine me and you
Conjoining hearts
Now merged as one
You and me
Will never be wrong
Flight through the mountians
Glide over sea
A whole new life beginning
For just you and me
This life for us
We are now free

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  • Abominangel.
    June 6, 2008

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    i like

    your imagery of combining and joining is excellent

    i like the idea of mixing souls also


    brilliant write

    xx