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If I had kissed you....

If I had kissed you,
would the earth had moved?
Would anything have changed
once your lips met mine?
Would I have felt more then
than I do when look into your eyes?
I did not kiss you.
I could not move.
I'm glad I didn't.
You changed too soon.
I learned so fast.
I'm glad I didn't kiss you,
we wouldn't have lasted.

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  • Heartfelt! Very well done!


  • laurel
    March 1

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    i liked this. it reminded me of my first kiss with my boyfriend, kindof - i avoided it for the longest time, because i was scared of commiting to the situation.
    your first two lines were spectacular =)


    • HeLovesMeNot
      March 1
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      Thanks, I'm glad I didn't kiss this dude he turned out to be a total jerk. I gotta admit I really genuinely liked him when I wrote the first two lines. Glad that's over.
  • Its nice.

    • HeLovesMeNot
      March 1
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      Thanks, it's something I just threw together really quick when I realized how long it had been sitting incomplete for so long.
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