Can you colour airwaves
with a resonating ripple?
these piano keys keep eyes on me
my hands express their plans and I
would rather father every vibe
this wooden box can hide; than fly
inside a sunset smile, wild and wide.
Your felled my ankles like anchors
I wedded the sidewalk; this small talk
will moonwalk me into your life
And life a lazor-razorblade; I'll etch and carve
My half into your half; my heart
Enveloping your own; You'll own
No secret I've not ripped into
Each silver-tear sliver withers
From your diamond eyes as you shiver; suprised
Than my chime was not gold-lined
I span you thick and slick across
My curling candid chains; so plain
With make-up masked dishonesty
So promise me you'll polish me
Though brilliantly i shine already
Keep your passion-stances steady
Love me, when I'M ready.
Please tell me what you think
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you know i would have to say you are the first , what i would class as, real poet i have read properley, again i think with this and dear sophie i have spent so long dealing in simple descriptions with my own stuff, that i need to start reading more of the abstract poetry like yours, so i may better understand and gain a wider range of thought , if that makes sense, i have to say that both of your poems i have read are so beautiful, and if i ever attain that level of wordsmithyness, i will be most elated.
Michael
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Terrible.
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blargh. :P
you're not terrible.
hahah.
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