"You dont love a woman because she is beautiful, she is beautiful because you love her"
Beauty coming from the intensity of the love you share
You know shes pretty on the outside...but beneath that her soul shines and heart glows
Look into her eyes and see the amazing person you fell for...over and over each time
Kiss the lips of perfection, you deem her perfect
Her personality caught your eye...noticed she was beautiful in every way
Love her for her true self
Treat her how she deserves
Beauty is only skin deep...unless they shine through
She is a great example
A contest entry
- but she is beautiful... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me a poem about beauty. by Sacred Geometry.
525 points, ended January 30, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whtcha think?
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a good write
loved the thoughts but I think this could be presented in a bit more aesthetically pleasing way.
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thanks.
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I love the description of the beauty shown here in the words..a heart warming piece you did..well done....
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thanks hun
glad u liked it.
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Hehehe, this is exactaly what i hope someone feels. I love this, its amazing, and hopefully so true.
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hehe ya...i hope too and glad u like it...
it kinda is true hehe
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Well, thank god for that, that means everyone that is loved is the most beautiful person in the world. ^_^
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lol awwww!
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