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Beauty Through My Eyes

intricately weaved
the strings of her heart
unmatched, yet unraveling
it's all about to start
and the gentle words
whispered play their part
x♥x
contemplating life
as it springs before her eyes
she cannot see her beauty
all she sees are lies
errupting into apathy
her soul to hypnotize
x♥x
to see beyond the surface
and love her forevermore
would take more than you think
but she's yours to adore
if you can enter delicacy
through that fragile door
x♥x
her blinding smile portrays
all she has to hide
if you look behind the light
and delve deeper inside
see true broken perfection
in all the things she's tried
x♥x
true beauty is not seen
but discovered in her soul
if you know just how to seek it
you can let it make you whole
just to know this sultry mystery
and unlock what's yet to be told

Author notes

i know a beautiful girl whom i love and i wrote this for her, and i finally got the nerve to show her ^^

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  • Sound of Madness
    July 1, 2008
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    This previously won a trophy so it shall be removed from my contest.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    I also can see that beautiful girl through your beautiful words my friend..you are a wonderful heart here....thanks for sharing it...