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shattered bones (haiku)

shattered bones
stripped of meat
a hyena cackles

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erm. this is one of my first haikus. make of it what you will.

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  • Origami Shapes
    June 2, 2008
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    I like the violence here, of nature, she is a violent entity in all her forms I think. It is a world where we kill or are killed, the hyena needs to live and so another creature must die to provide the nourishment, such is the flow of life. You express that well here, in short simple terms.