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Take a Big Breath

My mind thumping
my heart pumping
my thoughts jumping
to get some air..

This is the moment
when we all find out
where this story begins.

Hoping i don't make a fool of myself
i tiptoe across the room
feeling like I'm about to explode...

Well,no turning back now...
I've promised myself
no matter how difficult
it may be
I've told myself to just
wait and see.

Okay....
one step at a time
keep in rhyme.

Here goes nothing
take a big breath
I'm going to ask him
this is it

His answer could be yes......
Hope
or it could be No....
oh...

i ask my question
slow and straight
and just wait.

here he goes
its only one word
hurry tell me
or I'll go insane
I've already fried my brain
If i don't act now
my heart will be mush
please don't say no
i think
or it will be crushed.

He smiles brightly
and holds my hand
i think I'm dreaming
but he clears my thoughts
saying yes
my heart pops
i finally did
and took the chance.

Take a big breath
and let it go
for you never know
where It'll blow.......

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