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Friends forever. lyrics

*Chorus*


We'll always be friends,
Forever. MMMMMMM.
Just stay by my side,
And I will guide you.

*Verse 1*


I used to think of you and me,
I used to dream of how it could be,
We'll always be friends.



*Chorus*



*Verse 2*




I can't believe what I did,
I could have saved you,
I just there not knowing what to do.




*Chorus*




*Verse 3*




Please forgive me,
For pushing you,
Into the road.



*Chorus*






*Verse 4*





I didn't hear that car coming,
At least your not dead,
But how can I make it up to you?





*Chorus*



*Verse 5*




But still,
Your in a Coma,
But I'm here for you.



*Chorus* *Sing twice*








I miss you you know.

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  • sassykitty
    June 15, 2008

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    Aw - this is sad if a little twisted - check out the grammar - you're is you are! This has great potential and I look forward to seeing more of it as you work on it. Keep up the good work.


  • DawnKestrel
    June 2, 2008

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    A great start, I hope to see thefinished product soon!
    Good luck in my contest!