They were here,
now they're gone.
Empty chairs -
like their empty hearts.
Why don't they care?
Why don't they ask?
When something's wrong
they show no concern.
They have left me behind,
to rot here alone.
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I saw the picture as a girl being left behind and to upset to follow.
Well, wish me luck!!
-Emily
A contest entry
- Liek Picture Inspired #1 by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended June 13, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
For a Contest.
Comments
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You have captured the prompt well.
Congrats on your HM.
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i love you jo
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Great Write
Very powerfull write this says alot. I get the feeling of being in company with friends they go off without telling you and you are left alone. It could even be family that does it to you. Again very powerfull.
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Sad and gripping. I saw something similar when I saw the picture so I can feel the torment of the girl left alone and distraught.
Excellent write
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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So Simple So Close
I was always say that teher is a relationship between Poetry and drawing art , ( well
its not only me saying taht even the greatest poets ) what i wanted to say that you realy can draw with your words something you have seen, to make us able to see the picture very clear in our imaginations ... amazing write ...
~!AbDuL!~
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Ok hun! This has got to be my new favourite of yours! you haven't written in a while, and you created this! Amazing! Your words are matched perfectly for the picture! Best of luck. ♥
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Thanks so much!! I really appreciate this! Love ya!!
Em ♥
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