Rundown and ruined
Yet beautiful in it's own right
Portions still perfect
Not yet destroyed
By time's death touch
Beyond this work of art
Lies something of tantalizing promise
Fields of green grass
And cloud free blue skies
On these rolling hills
Against a backdrop of sweet blue
Doth darling little daisies grow
Their yellow an amazing contrast
Translucent petals spread upwards
Reveling in sweet sunshine
Author notes
{{Meh}}
A contest entry
- Close your eyes and tell me what you see by Meroza.
400 points, ended June 18, 2008, 31 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hey Sweet Pea,
You know, you really did a great job on this one, and to see a field of daisies this way, with the eyes closed is fantastic!!
Best of luck in this contest!
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Mom
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Awww pretty!! What a lovely thing to close your eyes and see.. very uplifting and cuteness!!
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Oh god this poem is so cute! You did excelent! I love! Amazing!
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