My fallen face
Save yourself again
These dark graces
Damnation of life
Forging yourself
Leaving everything
Pour your soul in here
Corrode and corrupt this
Everything pure and good
Walk in murky waters
And smudge these pages
Life taken its toll again
Suffering littering you
Riddled and solved
Awaiting the answers
For the pain in your eyes
Emptiness in your eyes
Destroying everything here
No regret for you do it again
Silky skin and mossy hair
A beautiful thing torn under
Forgotten to never return
A contest entry
- PIF by Virgoan.
500 points, ended June 14, 2008, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very well done...the last stanza though is not as strong as the others.
Keep sharing your gift.
HENSLEY
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