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Winter


Sun  shines narrowly
Eyes slitty shut against it
Has to be winter

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  • azure85 gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    Sun shines narrowly
    Eyes slitty shut against it
    Has to be winter

    Good descriptions of how the rays of the sun are slanted differently during the cold of winter, thank you so much.