Away there
in the distance
is the place where
the two rails
of the railway track meet.
A small town
full of little people
waiting for a tiny train
that was ever so big
when it left here.
Author notes
option 18
A contest entry
- Intrigue me with a memory by Amunet Wolfbane.
1000 points, ended June 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an interesting piece. I'll be back to read it again later. The image is fleeting and yet lingers. Odd but I like it.


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wow, interesting. This one made me think a little. nice write. Good luck in the contest.



