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In the distance

Away there
in the distance
is the place where
the two rails
of the railway track meet.

A small town
full of little people
waiting for a tiny train
that was ever so big
when it left here.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 8, 2008

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    This is an interesting piece. I'll be back to read it again later. The image is fleeting and yet lingers. Odd but I like it.


  • Kathryn Bowden
    June 2, 2008
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    wow, interesting. This one made me think a little. nice write. Good luck in the contest.