Damn! Where are you.
I'm home, the parents aren't.
WHERE ARE YOU.
My little misplaced friend.
AHA! Under the bed.
Alone at last, home alone
And now I...
DAMN! Flat batteries.
Author notes
Competition poem. Had to be 30 words or so (this is 31 words). Also had to be about a "lost friend". I did what I always do, and bent the interpretation.
Rather cheeky and childish, but I hope you like it.
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended June 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Is it wrong of me to still giggle everytime I read this? Probably.. but I do. /giggle.
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Congragulations on HM and this poem could of taken the mind to so many levels. HEHE ... I really like it as it makes you think about what that little freind could be. Thank you for sharing
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That is rather cheeky ^^ I like that too, and it was meant to be about a lost friend?? That's so quirky and strange it's funny XD
I wouldn't have come up with that so well done for you to come up with it
Well done on your HM, well deserved
Claire xx
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LOL...okay this great! Not what I was thinking at all, but definitely creative and fun...I enjoyed your take on this prompt...
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LOL The funny thing is I wrote this as a joke at first, just a spare of the moment thing, but everytime I read it I find it funnier. Just the whole idea of running around looking and than... BAM! flat batteries...
Ahh I'm just a teenage boy at heart.
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