I sing the words
but I feel nothing in them
I sip on
my vodka pomegranate drink
to find an escape
from the only feeling left in me
I don't want to feel it
I don't want to feel it anymore
and as I go numb
the tears slowly stop
maybe
its mostly my fault
and I know it is
but we are better off apart
you know
we are better off apart
and the alcohol seeps
into my blood
and I want to bleed out
to be dry inside
can I be
please
can I be
empty of it all
and not just
empty
Please tell me what you think
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love this poem
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very well conveyed these touching words are, full of bright bold emotion and anguish at the minds structure, it is a strange thing to know how best your inner world is when full and positive at the same time experienceing memories and thought chains that just make the same old chemical, that same old addictive 'hit' of emotion, and so we must hold the onto the positive without swinging the other way which is done through catching the mind via focus, the now, and the art of keeping busy, laughter also helps, and thats not just ordinary laughter at something laughter, cause that will lead you back to the cause and effect type thinking, it"s the laughter that would come from nothing, just by itself and its own only purpose one of my favorite workshops has always been a laughter workshop anyhairies great write got me rambling have a good one,
w a pair, a clear quartz crystal, and a disco ball
-jas
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This is such a great write and I could feel the pain through these words. Breaking up is never a nice thing to go through.
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The longing to forget is intense.. Great write. I like it.
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thanks
thank you for your comment. my heart is bleeding and I can't do anything and I'm kinda drunk so this doesn't make sence but thank you for commenting once again I do appriciate it
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