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Walk with me

 

Walk in my shadow,
comfort me... I shake... I tremble...
Teach me to embrace unknowns
without fear.

 

Walk with me.

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  • queen Moderators member
    June 23, 2008
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    This is so gooooood


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    This feels like a prayer. Beautiful.


  • notorious
    June 2, 2008

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    "Walk in my shadow"
    I like this...(and I like shadows, so even better).

    I think 'Walk with me' (the last line) should be in a new line...just a suggestion...thanks for entering =]