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The pain

There's a pain in me
Not for others to see
There's a pain in me

As I look beneath the troubles in my mind
There's a pain in me
and I’m running out of time

Shadows crouch around my brain
There’s a pain in me
I think I'll go insane

All these thoughts I have
now feel drum
There's a pain in me
There’s nowhere to run

There's a pain in me
I know not why
Excuse me now for I’m about to die.

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  • movedon
    June 2, 2008
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    Wow....This is a very strong write. You might want to consider some capitalization though. It kind of ticked me off not having a new sentance! But this is dark and filled with sorrow. *hugs you tightly* Just thought you might have needed one of those!!!

    Mylee