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Trapped In The Coma Of Memories

Green lawns and blue skies
Dragonflies dancing in the wind
The smell of freshly cut grass 

Now only memories

 

A place of peace and serenity

Replaced with chaos and loss

For modern

 

No more barns

The cows all grew old

The ducks all flew south

Now you see it, now you don't

 

The rich play while the poor move

Just another example of today's society

Equality just another memory

 

You?

Go ahead and play along

Forgot your past

Me?

I choose to live in the past

Trapped in the coma of my memories

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Usually when people try to make things better, they just make them worse. This is about a place where I grew up, and where now a vacation lot stands. My memories of a happier time.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 8, 2008

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    LIfe is interesting. We never know where we are going or will be heading too, but we always remember where we were. I like this piece, it echoes in the mind.


  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    June 1, 2008
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    Another great my dear...i loved this one a lot...it speaks out loud..keep it up with the good work