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[ i wish i could save you ]

i wish i could save you
i wish you'd be with me
because then i could save you
from this insanity

i can't stand here
and watch you fall
because i would fall first
so please stand up tall

i could not stand to watch you
slip down with all your friends
i cannot do this anymore
this, i cannot mend

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  • paperbackwriter
    June 3, 2008

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    AWESOME

    omGG i love it bestie it sounds liek this is about jeff?? u said u were over him and didn'tlike him in the fisrt place great write


    • cutiepiekiller
      June 4, 2008

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      HEHE, it's kinda about jeff, but it's about all of my druggie friends that keep falling further and further into obscurity