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Ocean Waves

letting the wind

move my head

without letting go

of your hand

 

its feels

almost right

a smile always

on my redden face

 

its nice to

not search for

a warm embrace

everyday

 

i used to hate blinking

thinking you would be

gone, yet every-time

i open my eyes, you are there 

 

ocean waves

come and go

but i know

when something is permanent 

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i know this person and its just my thoughts on the whole thing

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    June 2, 2008
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    This is so cute!! AWWWWWWWW!!!


  • Sle3p
    June 2, 2008

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    who is this about elbi? its a great poem you can write awy better then I can...MEH!!! i wish i could write as good as you...but who is it about?!?! *is curious* does elbi have a boyfriend? i think you do but i dont remember him or his name. But if he's dating you i know he has to be hot, (unless its donovan, hes not hot at all...he needs to cut his hair badly!!!) we must convince dono to trim his hair just a little. So many split ends...lmao. I love you elbi i'll talk to you later hopefully


  • The Luna Diviner
    June 2, 2008
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    damn u shelby its just to comfusing.....good poem

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