The midnight bell chimes softly
I look out my window,
Waiting for you to find me
The bell stops at eleven
And you never arrive
In a list
A contest entry
- Beautiful Mosaic of Options by Winterbirdie.
600 points, ended June 5, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is stunning. you blow me away every time, emma.
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this is awful...i hate when that happens, ive been feeling like that nonstop lately, and it makes me wat to cry. so emotionally this poem hits hard, and i like the vagueness to it. congrats on the hm!
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This is such a sad but good poem. I love the way you express your feelings. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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aw!
so sad
i hope this never happened :|
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This is a really good poem! Unfortunatly, you didn't read all my rules, because you didn't put your option. I'll assume that it was the 25 word option because of the 25 words, tho. I like the thoughts you have here. It is very sad, because you want whoever it is to find you, but they don't. Sad. Good luck in the contest.
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haha i told myself not to forget that cause i always forget to put the option number whenever i do an options contest
oh well. thanks for the HM tho =)
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