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Bliss

Our heat

    c o l l i d e s.

Sparks fly through the night.

Glowing embers of our lust,

flicker in your eyes.

Beads of passion

    reflected on your brow.

Our Nirvana.


 

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Prompt: Condensation

Hmm....condensation is apparently erotic

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 12, 2008
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    Congratulations on the silver, a good take on the prompt...Sue


  • DolphinLass silver member
    June 11, 2008
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    well done congrats on silver


  • eltortedequeso
    June 11, 2008
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    oh, short and sweet! very nice feel in so few lines! thank you for entering this for me!


  • movedon
    June 2, 2008

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    WHEW! is it hot in here or is it just you????!!!!

    Wonderful write auntie!
    love you

    Mylee

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