Sitting on the deck
watching blades of grass flowing,
around the earth sloping,
I climb with both hands and feet;
to gaze upon the harvest moon.
A contest entry
- Close your eyes and tell me what you see by Meroza.
400 points, ended June 18, 2008, 31 entries
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Comments
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Excelent! I can see the image you saw, this is great work.
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Heh heh, well this happened one time as a kid, and my mind involuntarily went back to it.
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I was surprised when I closed my eyes I didn't get sent to my happy place. River, a tree... this sounds like a beautiful vision. Is it real or just what you saw and imagined?
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