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There was once a castle in Cornwall

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There was once a castle in Cornwall

its stones lain upon earth

where souls of thousand years before

lived and died in their huts of mystical beliefs.

 

Black magic, sorcery and evil cling to its legendary air,

but even without their powers

the spirit of John Militon who restored it in the fifteen hundreds,

was consumed more with darkness than light.

 

Hands that claimed its walls as home

imbued so often in the climate radiating with biting chills,

being a refrigeration's ambience for icicles,

which form on the spine

when skeptics stroll is creepy corridors,

one howl, one transparent specter passing through the walls,

is enough to despoil the doubt in any mind.

 

As panoplies of paranormal phenomena

scrapes in lightning jolts across the mind,

a door in the castle revolves between earth and afterlife

where ghosts and phantoms travel

in their ectoplasm expressions.

 

Brain surges in volt of reason

to charge the sights with logic,

but the invisible keepers of Pengersick Castle

play the heart string violin with an eerie bow

its song replayed in a frightening, gut wrenching serenade,

unforgettable as fingernails drugged down a chalkboard.

Author notes

Links to information:
http://shopoflittlehorrors.com/UK%20haunted%20-%20Pengersick%20castle.htm

http://www.geocities.com/pomapples/pengersick

Image link: http://www.clairvoyancy.net/html/pengersick_castle.html

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  • tawk gold member
    June 4, 2008

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    Wow this is amazing! Such vivid imagery and emotions. I so enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest Theresa


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Well done!! You did your homework This is an intriguing write that allows the reader to almost experience these events as you presented them. Thanks for this entry and good luck!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    June 2, 2008

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    excellent~

    Excellent imagery in this poem lil brother...
    I don't see how you can pen poems this fast...
    Takes me 2-3 days to even come up with something remotely suitable for the contest...
    Best of luck in the contest...
    Love n hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Desire gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Wowzers~

    Another one to grab the reader and the images do stain the Mind~ if know what I mean
    I need to investigate this paranormal activity further

    Hands that claimed its walls as home
    imbued so often in the climate radiating with biting chills,
    being a refrigeration's ambience for icicles,
    which form on the spine
    These lines grab~

    Keep that quill dancing~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


  • StarEyes
    June 1, 2008

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    Bubs,

    What a read!!! This is beyond words. Not many leave me speechless, but this one sure did! I don't write like this because they are a bit hard for me, but this is fantastic!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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