i look around and nothing seems to be going right
i touch my belly and think of what could of been
since my miscarriage my life has not been very bright
i look across the street and kids are laughing and running around
i raise my head a little higher because i will be alright
maybe not right now but some day it will be
i will be happy one day in the future with everything despite
i will just take one day at a time puting one foot infront of the other
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Comments
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I enjoye this - as you mentioned the downsides of all that had happened, yet manage to keep it uplifting somehow, and looking towards the positives of life -
Well written, and, it felt while reading it, that you got something important off of your chest, and relieved yourself of a heavy burden -
Great job, and thanks for sharing it with us
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First of all...I get the first comment!
And second, I like how you are looking ahead towards brighter times, and I hope you reach them soon.
Signed,
~Lustful
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hahahaha...
i hope so too..i finaly laughed for the first time today..so its getting better
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