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Fading Innocence

Those eyes, That Smile
Take me back to yesteryear
When my heart sang
And love still soared
And it wasn't just a game
Then there's that walk
That sexy little draw
Mixed with passion and desire
And your innocence
It wants to fade
But I hope it can't be lost
Because I still see
The beauty, that is you

Author notes

For those ladies who want to give up on us men. Some of us can still that beauty, And many still desire you. We're not all pieces of Well you know what.

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  • Thank you for the thoughts and reminder that not all men are hurtful...I see why you believe in happily ever-after, you are one of the few who make it come true.

    Love,
    mystic

  • I know I'm ready to give up on men. This is amazing write Daddy.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 11

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    Appreciate your authors notes to make the icing on the cake...It is grand to have the comment...And it is a compliment that you have written here for us women of the fairer sex.....


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    Wonderfil Poem

    Good morning, It has been a while since I stopped by. I hope all is well with you. This was a lovely poem. You always were the sweet romantic. Your words are so true for many. I have never given up but maybe I should. Sometimes we settle for less then we deserve too. There should be a nice balance some where in the middle. You take care my friend. Hugs and Smiles.

    Bless You,
    Sandy

  • June-bug
    June 3, 2008

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    Wonderful write...and it is great to know that there are still gentlemen in the world. Very wise words here!!! For a true gentlemen knows the desires of a Laides heart...


  • Poet Muse silver member
    June 1, 2008
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    A profound wisdom here...

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