Laying there dreaming of him tonight
Thinking how he said all the words just right
She slips her hand down below
Into her panties real slow
Touching herself already so wet
Dreaming of the first time they met
Online she watched him so carefully
Wishing he was here so she can scream "Just take me"
Removing her undies breaking out the toy
Knowing she's about to scream out of pure joy
She smiles knowing this aint no condensation
As she wonders if he enjoyed their secret conversation
Author notes
Your prompt is the word:
Condensation
In a list
A contest entry
- It's Called 'Condensation' by eltortedequeso.
875 points, ended June 11, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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haha, oh wow! whew! hot and steamy! you definitely conveyed the wet! thank you for entering this!!!
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Very niiiice! Awesome job! Hot, hottie, hot hot hot
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i love it, i can really picture it happening
poetes -
Wow! This is great my friend!
Lovely work with this picture prompt
as always! I hope that you do well
with it in this contest. Good luck
to you with it here!
Jeremy0826
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Exquisite
Wow. Highly erotic and personal. You did a great job with this. The rhyme and flow are excellent. I wish you the very best in the contest. -
Someone needs to call the fire department lol What a steamy little write you have here
Those secret lovers will get ya every time. Good luck in the contest.
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hehe do i get the whole fire department hehe... that could be soooo much fun *dreaming*
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but but but you have to share lol
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ok I will... I learned to share.....!
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brilliant sis... just brilliant good luck!
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Ok, Did you find the old IM's that I had hid? This sounds like, well, never mind
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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hehe nope these are all mine.... my secrets! My secret Lover!
but ummm maybe I should check into you a little more hmmm lol... naughty girl you! oh wait thats me too hehe!
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Beautiful
Beautiful, sensual, sexy, this is just wow! I love it my friend
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hehe!
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