Her lips
sang lust
to playful ears.
As first impressions
undressed flesh;
and loved nothing
to the flame,
[she swallowed]
Author notes
Once_Beautiful_by_ReverseIncision
20words
A contest entry
- 8/20/30 Quickie {Prompts Up} by SuicidalLover.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Incredible
I love this poem. It was inspiring and it really made me think. The picture was amazing. It was very deep and dark, in a way that not many can understand. Nicely done, you have true talent. Please check out my poems. - MidnightDreams -
wonderful
Oh my so well done and creative. Congratulations on the honorable mention
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very good.....
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Wow! I thought this was incredible. wonderful take on that picture. that picture is really thought provoking...
"As first impressions
undressed flesh;"
That is incredibly poetic!
well done and grats on the HM!
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Wow.....um.....I didn't do did I?
This is great hun. I'm glad you entered.
~Kystal Angel
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Excellent
You went in a totally different direction than I did on this one. Amazing write my friend. Best of luck in this contest
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This was a fantastic write. Best of luck in the contest
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