Suddenly, out of nowhere
I saw you
Differently
Suddenly, you were something
Exotic
Amazing
Suddenly, I loved your eyes
More than
Anything
And suddenly, your hair shone light
I hadn't seen
Before
I don't know why, so suddenly
You shook me up
Inside
I just hope, when I tell you
That you'll say something
Back.
Author notes
For Meghan.
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Aww...Hannah. Its a perfect one for the feeling of a crush. If she's deserving of you she'll talk to you. Dont forget we all love you!
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aww sis! this is really cute... I can remember dealing with crushes. Actually, I'm kinda dealing with one now, since my boyfriend and I broke up. But don't worry, I'm okay with it. But anyways, this is amazing and so cute! Keep up the good work! Love you!
♥Chelsea
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awwww this is so cute. you really conveyed a crush really well, how we start to see our crush as such a beautiful and ethereal person, and also that small hope that they reciprocate those feelings back. we all go through it, and im happy you're going through it too, and i hope they like you back
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Good that you plan to tell them, but careful how you go about the business of it. Do it, but maybe don't do it by screaming out "I LOVE YOU!!!!" as they are innocently walking by. Perhaps something more subtle, like, "Um... -name here- I really like you." ^_^ But that's obvious and I ramble. Anyway, good luck sis!!!
<3
-Dlvvanzor
P.S. It's a good poem too. Conveys your feelings.
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Uh...thanks sis, but did I SAY I was gonna scream I at her? I'm not brave and/or stupid enough to do that! Sheesh. *is embarrassed*
But I'm glad you liked it. Thanks. *hugs*
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