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Love's secrets.

Golden fruit,

so divine

I'd like to scoop it up

and eat each one as if it were a memory.

I'd like to dance and live and laugh

throw up rich red autumn leaves

and dive in liquid honey lakes.

I'd like to listen to love's secrets,

be the one to tame the moon, and keep it.



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  • just mercedes gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    I love this, the exuberance and joy. Especially /dive in liquid honey lakes/ and /be the one to tame the moon../ You don't ask for much, do you? Beautiful poem.