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Inflamed

Scorned for the last time
her molten heart filled with hate
Your offer for forgiveness
burned before your eyes
Inflamed!

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  • PurringKitten silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    nothing burns like a scornful tongue...unforgiving and filled with hate...wow! you have matched this picture perfect...way to go on the trophy!


    • buffsab99
      June 20, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much for all of your wonderful comments


  • SuicidalLover
    June 1, 2008

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    Ooooooooooo......*walks away* I didn't see nothing!

    A great write here. I'm tickled by it. Thanks for entering!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    awww wow, this is great
    wonderful ending, and good luck
    take acre
    stephanie

    • buffsab99
      June 1, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much. My muse has been all over the place lately


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 1, 2008

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    awww dark and evil i love it!!!!!!!! great write! awesome job here... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest....!

    • buffsab99
      June 1, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much, I love where you went with yours as well


  • Nothing But No
    June 1, 2008

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    This was a really amazing take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest

    • buffsab99
      June 1, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot to me

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