His kisses are like
Sizzling
Rose petals
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Down my body
Making me
Want more
As his lips start
Exploring
Author notes
20 words
Once_Beautiful_by_ReverseIncision
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A contest entry
- 8/20/30 Quickie {Prompts Up} by SuicidalLover.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
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HOT!! i absolutely loved it its short but really grabs your attention. a really strong piece
keep up the good writing and never stop
xoxo zoe <3
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HOT HOT HOT......Damn....I should've read the warning label on this one! A great poem of buring desires twin. I love it! Oh oh oh...got a bg for you and me!!!
Thanks for entering!
~Kystal Angel
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wow, this is a diff. take on the prompt and very sesual, and such. great write and good luck
take care
stephanie
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This was absolutely brilliant. Wonderful take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
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thank you!
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Ok, where are you hiding him? Under your bed This is great... I know what you are thinking.
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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hehe Im not telling... he's my secret lover!
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Oh come on, you can tell me I won't tell......
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hehe He's right here hehe but shhhhhhh
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well ok, good thing i am good at keeping secrets...
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hehe...! its in my family column
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Beautiful
So beautiful and sensual hun, I love this. You got so much more from this picture than I did
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hehe.....! Im ummm in that kind of Mood.....
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