Yellow
and red union
like a flaming sunrise
makes me lust for a breakfast of
peaches.
Author notes
Down here we pronounce union as 'yewn yon'
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Comments
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A beautiful cinquain, my friend. Vivid imagery instills such a wonderful picture in the mind, lingering long after the read. Thanks for this wonderful addition, and Good Luck!


