The lips of a tyrant,
Mocking my love with ember kisses.
She wouldn't burn,
And my heart prays for rain.
Author notes
Credit Goes To: Once_Beautiful_by_ReverseIncision
A contest entry
- 8/20/30 Quickie {Prompts Up} by SuicidalLover.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silver to Gold by GypsyEyes.
300 points, ended June 9, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short....beautiful.....amazing
Warmest,
Mylee -
Shower but amazing.=]
Right on topic of the contest too.
Damn girl, you've just joined and you've gotten way more trophies than i'll ever have.hehe.
Told ya,you're great. -
congrats on silver, this is a really really good poem,
short yet very effective,
keep penning, all my love,
kitty xxx -
beautiful message for such few lines! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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LOL....that was a kewl take on the prompt. I like it very much.
Thanks for entering! 
~Kystal Angel
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hahahaha wow, i really love the ending, and well the begining too, but the ending made me giggle to myself, lol.
lovely write and good luck
stephanie
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Mhmm, really good. ^^ I like this one especially the first and last lines.
Great job and good luck in the contest.
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What strong language - it's like a punch in the mouth and then a gentle kiss! *shivers* Very nice!!!
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Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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awwwwwwwwwwww what a lovely write....! thanks for sharing this with us... great job and good luck in contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you so much I loved your piece as well.
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Excellent
This is an awesome take on this prompt. Wishing you the best of luck in this contest
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Thank you so much, your compliments truly mean alot to me. Thank you for the well wishes also
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