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Breathe

[Just Breathe In]

Sucking in flames
of time and hatred,
she prays upon the beautiful
to feed her gruesome appetite.

A contest entry

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  • SuicidalLover
    June 1, 2008
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    Ooohhh....this is nice...dark. I'm pleased you entered my contest. Thanks!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    aww wow, this is lovely. really liek the begining.
    take care and good luck
    stephanie


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 1, 2008

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    hehe what a great write.... this is really good... thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest!!!!!!!!


  • Nothing But No
    June 1, 2008
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    Lovely. Best of luck in the contest