Breathing flames,
blackened lips,
removing
all beauty from the world.
Satan? No.
Just a lonely soul,
broken
and seeking revenge.
Author notes
20 words.
Pic prompt.
Credit: Once_Beautiful_by_ReverseIncision
A contest entry
- 8/20/30 Quickie {Prompts Up} by SuicidalLover.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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wow
this was amazing and definitely worthy of the gold.
that picture is awesome and you have penned your words very well.
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Sorry, I meant the site not the poem!!
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Hmm I don't know why the person below doesn't get it! A soul that has been blackened and defeated breathing flames in a spirit of fighting back .. not someone evil.. just someone broken!
Awesome!
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i don't think i quite have the hang of this
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very nice...
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Wow....that was great! You have done a wonderful job in 20 words. I'm humbled you entered my conest. Thanks.
~Kystal Angel
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ooohhh, i really like this alot.
wonderful take on the prompt and good luck
take care
stephanie
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wow great use of just 20 words.... so much said in so few words... love it!!!! great write thanks for sharing good luck in contest!
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Superb
This was amazing! A wonderful take on the prompt indeed. Best of luck in the contest
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