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How the Ocean Pours

When I first saw this wet sight, and of it coming down,

  The brain said think around.

Let everyone go out and play.

  On the surf boards or what, how should I know.

 

In any and all of your clothes.

  I'll add a ring of soap around the top.

When you came back in change your clothes,

  Then do it again,

 

Well I thought This would do the thing,

  The end of dirty clothes day for me.

Then I remember how soap tasted in ones mouth.

  Back to the laundry mat is me 

 

 

  6-01-2008 

 

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  • Sandygram
    June 5, 2008

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    HeHeHe!!!!!

    Oh this was cute Mac. Made me smile my friend. You do have a way with words that brings smiles and sunshine to me and others. Thank you for that. Somedays smiles they are far and few and much needed.

    Bless You,
    Sandy

  • PureCountry
    June 3, 2008

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    My Brother, Would

    that the seemingly endless exercises of life could deal with so easily. Perhaps there is a lesson for us even in the act of doin laundry. I will admit I have yet to find it though.

    Great Orignality and Concept. Wonderfully Written!

  • Uglyblackdog
    June 3, 2008
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    very out of the box and creative!!


  • z etoile
    June 2, 2008
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    Your poems are real life poems. You got the down to earth poems. I enjoy reading them great job!


  • Katie Lazette
    June 1, 2008
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    Cute Poem Mac

    This gave me a chuckle. I too remember the taste of soap in my mouth. Aahh memories...Katie

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