Hate Me or Love Me

I began from a tiny seed
blooming into beauty
Protected from harm
by my arms of thorn's

Many just want to view me
others wish to cut and display me
Hurt me all you want
i grow back stronger each time

Close your eyes
inhale my beauty
Intoxicate your mind
with my aroma

You will miss me more
because of my scent
Clinging to your soul
forever

Hate me or Love me

you will be back for more

My beauty you will never resist

my heart you will never have

Author notes

on't offer me roses by *temporary-peace

A contest entry

Variety by luna-midnight. 1000 points, ended June 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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The Unknown Poet1
June 1, 2008

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This is a strong write and works well with the picture for the contest. And to think there are those that are just like this!!! Some nice images and I especially like because of my scent
Clinging to your soul
forever
Though I would use clings instead of clinging it is a vvery nice turn oh a phrase good luckk in the contest
- buffsab99
  June 2, 2008
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  Thank you
  Thank you very much. I will take your suggestion into concideration
Lil-Bit Crazy
June 1, 2008

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wow blow me away! hehe love this!!!!! your words melt me hehe... this was very good thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest...!
- buffsab99
  June 1, 2008
  
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  Thank you
  Thank you!!! I am glad you liked it so much. Dont want to melt too much of you
- - Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 1, 2008
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    hehe! would you like a drink....!
luna-midnight
June 1, 2008

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wow, very strong write
lovely job and good luck
thanks or entering
take care
stephanie
- buffsab99
  June 1, 2008
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  Thank you
  Thank you so much. This was a fun prompt to work with.